Community Based Essay

The community based essay was a good way for me to get a feel for what I need to improve in my writing and also what my strengths are. I figured out that I am good at writing in a persuasive, convincing style. With this said, I need to improve upon my sentence structure especially my begining and concluding sentences. I also need to make sure I have my MLA format down because I didn't quite get that perfect for my final draft. Overall, I liked writing this essay and put a lot of work into it, now it's just a matter of me fine tuning my skills.